支招小作文(163) I 动态柱 澳洲六个城市的水库水位变化

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支招小作文(163) I 动态柱 澳洲六个城市的水库水位变化


November 2, 2023

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[2023/ 10/28] The chart below shows the water levels in reservations in six cities in Australia in October 2009 and October 2010.


【主体段分段】:按照时间分段

【开头段】

The bar chart compares six Australian cities in terms of water levels of reservoirs in October 2009 and October 2010 .

【概述段】

Overall, Brisbane had the highest water level of reservoir among all the cities in both years.Also, except the water level in Sydney, the figures in all the other five cities showed a rising trend.

思路要点:

- Brisbane的水库水位两年都最高

- 除了Sydney,其他城市的水位都上升

【Body 1】

In 2009, the water level in Brisbaneranked the topamong these cities(98%),followed bythe figure in Perth(80%) and that in Melbourne(78%).By contrast, the water level in Darwinwas the lowest(36%), which was roughlyhalf ofthe figure in Gold Coast.

思路要点:2009年

- Brisbane水位排第一,Perth和Melbourne分别排名第二、第三

- Darwin水位最低,大约是Gold Coast的一半

【Body 2】

In the subsequent year,there emerged a marginal growth by2% in the water levels of reservoirs in Brisbane, Perth and Darwin. The water levels in Melbourne and Gold Coastalsoexperienced an upward trend, with the figures rising considerably by 5%.By contrast, Sydney was the only city where the water level of reservoirdropped significantlyfrom 44% in 2009 to 40% in 2010.

思路要点:2010年

- Brisbane, Perth and Darwin的水位小幅度上升

- Melbourne和Gold Coast 的水位显著上升

-只有Sydney的水位显著下降


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